Interesting, if nothing else
I enjoy the idea that you have put forth, and can see potential, but some things just didn't match up. I think that the art style is a little off for the theme and setting, but it is understandable how this bright theme could be used to tell an interesting story. I just think that a dark, ragged, theme would be more suitable, especially for the plot you have shown. I truly can see this becoming an interesting series. Quite nice.
Not bad, much potential
I can imagine so many scenes and settings for a man to run from toast from. I can see this becoming something amazing, but it isn't yet. Still pretty cool.
First of all I must congratulate myself for being here, your praise can follow. In return I hope to warmly accept all those that try. No cash, no credit, no problem. You're welcome just the same. To what? To everything, my friend. Yeah.
Age 30, Male
Student
Farmington NM
Joined on 12/29/09
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