Interesting, if nothing else
I enjoy the idea that you have put forth, and can see potential, but some things just didn't match up. I think that the art style is a little off for the theme and setting, but it is understandable how this bright theme could be used to tell an interesting story. I just think that a dark, ragged, theme would be more suitable, especially for the plot you have shown. I truly can see this becoming an interesting series. Quite nice.
Not bad, much potential
I can imagine so many scenes and settings for a man to run from toast from. I can see this becoming something amazing, but it isn't yet. Still pretty cool.
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